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Thread: The sum of the parts
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06-16-2013 #1
The sum of the parts
Re-write coming
2 out of 2 members liked this post.Last edited by Prospero; 11-04-2014 at 02:15 PM.
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06-18-2013 #2
Re: The sum of the parts
A wonderful story, beautifully written. You have a way with words, my friend. But I knew that already.
Are there any more where that came from?
But pleasures are like poppies spread
You seize the flow'r, the bloom is shed
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06-18-2013 #3
Re: The sum of the parts
Thanks Robert. Many... but since the thread is called shemale stories, not for here...
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06-19-2013 #4
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Re: The sum of the parts
Great, great story. Made me really think about how we judge people and their decisions in life. Thanks for making your words available to us. I'm fairly new here, but am enjoying this forum very much already.
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06-19-2013 #5
Re: The sum of the parts
Thanks Tristan for taking the time to read it and for your generous remarks.
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06-20-2013 #6
Re: The sum of the parts
Nice story ,well written , thanks Prospero.
You really know how to build a story with subtle shading , it has the feel of a true story . If you added the rain it was a brilliant stroke ,if the rain really occurred you described and used it beautifully to frame the scene.
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06-20-2013 #7
Re: The sum of the parts
Thanks for your positive comments. Of course I added the rain sukumvit boy.,. it is a work of fiction. (Obviously some elements were drawn on experience... _) and i await my sternest critic here Stavros to point out which famous short story i was referencing in the final few paragraphs.
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06-26-2013 #8
Re: The sum of the parts
Oh , goodie another puzzle . Yes, it did sound faintly reminiscent (but you made it your own).
So my first guesses as to the inspiration for that final scene go to W Somerset Maugham ,"Of Human Bondage " or James Joyce , "The Dead"
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06-26-2013 #9
Re: The sum of the parts
Spot on with The Dead
I have a new tale in the works specially for HA
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07-03-2013 #10
Re: The sum of the parts
Interesting......would love to hear the story behind the story
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