Trannsexual film script

[g@meb0y]

the biggest "problem" of sorts that i noticed was this one:



if you're familiar with hero-driven storytelling (hero's journey) then you'll probably know that CARL isn't just going to tell TONY to become a superhero. also the "reluctantly agrees to" kinda implied a level of nonchalance on your main characters part. was he, like, considering doing something else?

also- the forced feminzation angle seems a little unnecessary and propels the whole story into something more akin to pornography. why wouldn't the "disgraced professor" just try and kill him? you know- like how most guys operate. does this professor just go around converting his enemies into transsexuals?

i'm not sure what tone you're going for, but if it's supposed to be comedic then i guess it works. if you're trying to make something more serious- then you've lost me

It takes quite a few heated arguments before Tony finally agrees to try becoming a hero. and Tony knows nothing about super heroes, whereas Carl is a comic geek. It's not until after the sex change that Tony truly realizes the importance of his powers. Also, Professor Ratcliff explains in a big speech why he doesn't just kill tony. He wants to shatter Tony's reality, and destroy his world like Tony destroyed his.

[g@meb0y]

Where did you see movies about men being forced to become transsexuals? What site is this? I've seen alot of TS porn and I know my porn. This I have never heard of or seen. As I have said I have seen forced fem scenes about crossdressers, but not TS women.

There was a site on blogspot for the longest time called "forced fem captions" where men had surgeries done to them to make them either T-Girls or full on women. I think it's on tumblr now. I can't find the exact site but here is one similar
http://trixiemarieslut.tumblr.com/

Lustcomic does forced feminization stories all the time that includes surgery.

granted, I haven't seen any live actions videos that included surgeries, but in erotic stories and porn comics I see it all the time. Also I am probably using the wrong term when i say porn comics, but I can't think of the proper one atm.

[TSPornFan]

There was a site on blogspot for the longest time called "forced fem captions" where men had surgeries done to them to make them either T-Girls or full on women. I think it's on tumblr now. I can't find the exact site but here is one similar
http://trixiemarieslut.tumblr.com/

Lustcomic does forced feminization stories all the time that includes surgery.

granted, I haven't seen any live actions videos that included surgeries, but in erotic stories and porn comics I see it all the time. Also I am probably using the wrong term when i say porn comics, but I can't think of the proper one atm.

Due you proved my point. You don't understand the difference between a TS and crossdresser. Secondly, that site features crossdressers.

[g@meb0y]

Due you proved my point. You don't understand the difference between a TS and crossdresser. Secondly, that site features crossdressers.

You call that a crossdresser? I'm not saying all forced fem stories include surgery, but they do exist.

[bluesoul]

I see what you're saying, and I can definitely make changes accordingly. I think one thing I can definitely do is further emphasize how he secretly wants to be a transsexual and doesn't fully realize it yet. I already have a few scenes before the change of him failing miserably with his girl friend at the time. I also have a masturbation scene towards the beginning, but I don't say what he is jacking too. I could actually describe it now as some T-Girl porn. I could also throw in some awkward romance bits between him and Carl before the change to further show that he isn't sure about his sexuality. Finally, when he talks with his mom at the end i could have not be as surprised, maybe even put in some flashbacks of him dressing as a girl as a kid, or doing other girly things in his developmental stages of childhood and adolescence. You feedback is definitely appreciated though, because I want this hero to be something T-Girls can look up to, because there aren't any Transsexual superheros at the moment. There are Gay and even lesbian heroes, but no Transsexuals. What do you think? Would you like to read it?

so, before TONY was a tranny superhero he was straight and a likely member of shemale yum, then after he's kidnapped and given FREE srs he start's having a relationship with his roommate CARL?

so- not only was his gender changed, but so was his orientation? i think the real hero here is the professor. i'd focus more on him, then have him going around 'correcting' the world by giving tranny escorts srs after kidnapping them whilst he collects the money from their clients which he can use to fuck up that stupid school that TONY was going to that tried to suppress his ingenious tranny changing technology and skills

you said there are no tranny superheros. well, there are no srs doctor superheros either

[TSPornFan]

Oh I hope you realized that the "surgery pictures" are real genetic female pornstars. I would know because I also watch straight porn.

Dude no one has never and I mean never has ever been forced to become a TS in a porno scene. That is illegal. No one can force someone to change their sex. Do you realize what is coming out of your mouth?

[g@meb0y]

so, before TONY was a tranny superhero he was straight and a likely member of shemale yum, then after he's kidnapped and given FREE srs he start's having a relationship with his roommate CARL?

so- not only was his gender changed, but so was his orientation? i think the real hero here is the professor. i'd focus more on him, then have him going around 'correcting' the world by giving tranny escorts srs after kidnapping them whilst he collects the money from their clients which he can use to fuck up that stupid school that TONY was going to that tried to suppress his ingenious tranny changing technology and skills

you said there are no tranny superheros. well, there are no srs doctor superheros either

Tony's orientation was closeted gay if anything before the surgery. and that would be a completely different story you are suggesting, one which I am not interested in telling. Professor's Ratcliff's actions define him as a villain. They are done with malice for the aim of revenge, whereas Tony is actually fighting to help people. Your suggestion would be an entirely different story.

[g@meb0y]

Oh I hope you realized that the "surgery pictures" are real genetic female pornstars. I would know because I also watch straight porn.

Dude no one has never and I mean never been forced to become a TS in a porno scene. That is illegal. No one can force someone to change their sex. Do you realize what is coming out of your mouth?

That's why I said it doesn't happen in live action porn, I said that in my first reply to you.

[Prospero]

Almodovar used a forced sex change as the central theme of a movie he made two years ago. But there was no porn element. The procedure was conducted by a plastic surgeon for purposes of revenge. It was called The Skin I Live In.

My suggestion is read a book on story construction or on film writing. Screenplay by Sid Field is a classic one.

[Jericho]

The forced sex change has been used in Transsexual porn stories forever, and it lends creativity and originality to the story.

Erm....!