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10-24-2005 #1
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Un poeme pour Allanah
Allanah à Bora-Bora
Les yeux marrons des vahinés magiques
M'évoquent tes beaux yeux et leur belle caresse
Les constellations, le ciel électrique,
Dessinent tes cheveux châtains avec délicatesse.
J'écoute la mer mourir sur le rivage,
Et c'est ta voix magnifique qui une fois encore m'emmène...
Un aigle rose entame son voyage,
Mais c'est à toi, Allanah, que mes yeux appartiennent...
Ryo, rêveur de tes yeux...
Allanah, Montreal (and me) are waiting for you
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10-24-2005 #2
for the english folks: how sweet
Maroon eyes of the magic vahines
Your beautiful eyes and their beautiful caress evoke me
Constellations, electric sky,
Your hair châtains with delicacy draws.
I listen to the sea to die on the shore,
And these is the splendid voice which once again takes me along...
A pink eagle starts its voyage,
But it is with you, Al, that my eyes belong...
Ryo, dreamer of your eyes...
u will be fucking fat bitches in no time
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10-25-2005 #3
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Thnx for the translation hollywoodbuckstrap, my english isn't that good when it comes to poetry, hope Allanah will appreciate
Allanah, Montreal (and me) are waiting for you
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10-25-2005 #4
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Allanah, Montreal (and me) are waiting for you
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10-25-2005 #5
Aww how sweet!
Thank you for the thoughtful gesture.
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10-25-2005 #6
I quite like this line:
I listen to the sea to die on the shore,
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10-25-2005 #7
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Good translation hollywoodbuckstrap, although you got some things wrong:
A 'vahine' or 'wahine', as it is also written, is a Polynesian woman
Les constellations, le ciel électrique,
Dessinent tes cheveux châtains avec délicatesse
means
The constellations, the electric sky
designed your brown hair with delicacy
Great poem Ryo Arabi, by the way
Navin R. Johnson: You mean I'm going to stay this color??
Mother: I'd love you if you were the color of a baboon's ass.
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10-25-2005 #8
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Here is my contribution
To Allanah
I wish to lay my kisses on you will you sleep,
tangle our bodies while we lie there on the bed,
I long to be one of the secrets that you keep,
one of the thoughts that's always running through your head.
I want to wake up with you in the break of day,
and be the first to see you smiling as you do,
I want to ask you if you want to go away,
to travel with me on a sailboat made for two.
We'll travel wide and far, wherever you may ask
we'll travel through the the thick and thin and through the night,
for when you're with me nothing is a task,
and all is possible, because it feels so right.
To be with you, your body one with mine,
to feel your perfumed skin look in your eyes,
the way your face and amber hair align,
I wish to worship in the temple of your thighs.
Alannah, what great goddess of the earth created you,
hellbent to make me suffer through my yen
and making wishes, praying they may come true
to make you mine, one day, no matter when.
Navin R. Johnson: You mean I'm going to stay this color??
Mother: I'd love you if you were the color of a baboon's ass.
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10-25-2005 #9
sorry i was just using a translator...i failed outta french class....
u will be fucking fat bitches in no time