Sometimes Business is Pleasure......

[giovanni_hotel]

Damn!!!

It's really hard to read when you're stroking yourself off..

[DL_NL]

That was indeed a hot, well-written account... agree, keep a journal and collect the best memories.

[SexxxyJade]

Thx everyone I guess I'm gonna start occasionally posting stories on my blog. Stay tuned.
www.sexxxy-jade.net/blog

[transmaven]

Jade,

An observation if I may. Your story is very good, but if you decide to write fiction at some point -- slip in a surprisingly *negative* detail/passage at some point. Take the reader out of it v. slightly -- then the challenge is to survive that drop and drag them back up into the bliss. Erotica is very hard to write well. All the pussies are wet and tight as fuck, all the cocks are miraculously large and potent, all participants are always infinitely satisfied.

Now, although reality is often like this :P -- fiction doesn't require the flaws of reality so think about cutting the sweet with a touch of bitter.

Then I think you could write some seriously stiffening porn.

[SexxxyJade]

You mean something like the maid walking in, or a gang of cops bursting in on us?..lol
Or maybe the guy tossing his girl out the window and turning out to be sum deranged killer.lol

[hwbs]

good to see u have not forgotten us

[Ts CinthyaNY]

Very good story , Loved... girl you have it in you .
That couple will be fucking as rabbits after their experience with you ... wow!!

Wonder how many guys here already jerked on your story, lol.

Love...

Cinthya.

[nylust]

Jade,

You write really well.

Joseph

[bubbski]

That story kicked (and licked) ass!!!!!

I have to take a cold shower now.

[NjTranceAddict]

Fantastic story!