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07-19-2009 #1
GOTH THREAD
Calling all goths and emos , feeling depressed about life or love then post here. Share poetry , art , pics whatever.
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07-19-2009 #2
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I'm a NY Jets fan, does that count?
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07-19-2009 #3
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I'm up to my ears in sad poetry!
I wrote this a few days ago.
The Doldrums
Can you see or hear eyes screaming ‘help me‘?
How about ‘love me‘?
Can you see the bruises from life’s beatings?
Repair said damage to the soul?
How about if she resigns herself to her room for days or weeks on end?
If she has a sick relationship with herself,
That promotes isolation.
Where the other her keeps her too weak to reach out, but strong enough to self-righteously repel you.
So that even if you are talented enough to see, hear, and repair her afflictions- you cant.
She’s insane because she does this day in day out, but somehow, somewhere- expects different results.
As if luck were real. As if a deity will step in and pull her from the doldrums.
For all her sense and sensibility and sensitivity- despite her intellect and intelligence,
She’s blocked by fear and insecurity. Near defeated.
Perhaps its just those attributes that put her where she is.
If she didn’t understand or internalize her experience and perceptions to the extent at which she does,
She’d somehow be as blissfully ignorant as she is painfully aware.
Despite her stagnancy, she’s curiously optimistic.
So don’t shake your head and lower your gaze at her just yet.
Even if it never comes,
Assuredness in a bright future chin-checks her incessant, deadening comfort in seclusion.
Some far away tomorrow holds the joy that eludes her today. And that’s strangely okay.
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07-19-2009 #4
My Love
I close my eyes and i see her.
She takes my hand and leads me through the dark
I hold her close and breathe her in
Her pale skin glows under the moonlight
She knows all my faults and loves me anyway
We embrace and kiss , I awake alone
I long to find her in my waking dreams
Or die in my sleep.
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07-19-2009 #5
That was beautiful Alyssa, thank you for sharing.
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07-19-2009 #6
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Originally Posted by rockabilly
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07-19-2009 #7
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07-19-2009 #8
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Here's my poem..........
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07-19-2009 #9
Please be respectful, if you dont wish to contribute then just stay away.
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07-19-2009 #10