thumper_kicks
09-25-2008, 03:05 PM
this is the first part to my first attempt at an erotic story. the beginning, ill admit is a bit lacking of erotica, but i hope you like it all the same. i'm going to finish writing it anyway, but would love some constructive comments, or ideas for future story direction.
i hope you like it. plz pm me or add comment here, thx and enjoy.
Adopted sister –
A few years back, my parents decided to adopt a girl from Russia. My mums’ friend was the one who told them about how young boys and girls were being given up for international adoption by their parents so they could escape the ongoing conflict in the region.
My father is a lawyer and my mother is a G.P. so we have always lived life quite comfortably, and I have grown to be independent as my parents are often worked right off their feet throughout the year. It was when I was 14 years old that my family gained a new member. Her name was Jasmine, she was 16 years old and she was unbelievably gorgeous. When she first arrived, it was clear that she could not understand English very well, but with our help, my new sister found her groove quickly, and we became a strong family. I would do anything for my sister.
Two years on, I’m 16 and my sister is 18, and what a stunner. She is 6 foot 2, weighs no more than 55kg, toned, athletic, with lightly golden skin and dirt-blonde hair. She has the face of an angel. Me, well, I’m not going to lie to you. I’m 6 foot, 58kg, and I am a pretty slight build, but I have a passion for boxing, so am pretty good in a fight. Honestly, my cock is 7 inches long and what id recon is average thickness. Nothing special, but it keeps me happy. I wouldn’t be described as hot, but any girl I’ve met has always called me cute. I’ve got a great sense of humour and can make just about anyone burst into laughter. My sister Sais that later in life, ill be fighting them off. I have my reservations, but we shall wait and see.
Both my sister and I are naturally shy people, her I don’t know why. But for us this works. We have a great relationship and help is there whenever we need it. My sister is straight, but has made it clear that she will not even think of boys until after high school or even after university. I, on the other hand, have some serious bisexual tendencies. I’ve never acted upon any urges; so lie confused amongst my fellow teenagers of the world.
Being close, my sister and I are quite open with one another, and she is the only person I have ever told about my cravings. She is great about it. She is always there if I get upset or start thinking about how our parents would react if they found out that I might be bisexual.
Right on my 16th birthday, my sister took me to an adult toyshop and bought me a few items to quench my ever-growing thirst. She helped me pick out an assortment of dildos in all shapes, sizes and functions. She also bought me a penis pump and a bunch of condoms, like 1000 in a box generic ones. As we were leaving, my sister was given a box by the storeowner, and I could only assume these were things she had bought on a previous occasion and was picking them up now. She wouldn’t let me see what she bought for herself. My sister only had one rule for me. She would only buy me dildos and the like that had no movement-parts, so no machines or vibrators. The only dildo she let me get with a suction cup was an 8-inch long, 3-inch thick black cock. Apart from this monster, my favourite was a largish butt plug that was made to stay in your ass for an entire day, and also a flexible double dong that was 18 inches long. I was really looking forward to playing with them.
Next up, Jasmine took me to a well-known gay area of town to have my ass and pubic hair removed using laser treatments. She told me that it would make playtime that much easier, more enjoyable and a whole lot cleaner. I have to admit, I loved having my hair laser-removed because my butt was now baby-skin smooth and my cock and balls looked a whole lot bigger. The thing I was most pleased about was that now my ass had definition, being rid of that ridiculous bush I once had.
When we got home, my sister made me sit down with her straight away and read all the instructions for everything she had just bought me, from the condoms and lubricant to the dongs and penis pump. She placed special significance on making sure I knew how to safely use the pump, telling me just how wrong things can go if I don’t use it right. To say the least, the whole talk was quite a cheek-reddening affair.
The final thing my sister did before sending me on my merry way was show me an instructional video on how to use a douche properly and to prepare an asshole for anal penetration. Finally it said how to ensure that it is as clean as possible when tidying up.
As soon as we were done, and as my sister expected, I was out of there like a flash. I ran up to my room, stowed away my box of toys in the back of my closet and moved towards the bathroom door that separates my and my sisters’ rooms. One thing she liked about having a bi-curious brother was that I kept the bathroom clean.
I went into the bathroom, stripped naked and sat down on the bath mat. I filled my new douche with warm water and the applied a small amount of lubricant to my sphincter like the video had said. Id gone no. 2 before we went out and hadn’t eaten anything since, so I was sure my bowels would be empty. The cleaning was a success, and after two flushes, ran crystal clear.
After that was done, I put some KY on my hand and smeared it on my bum, working it into my flesh. I then started putting a finger or two into my ass, slowly at first, then a little faster. It didn’t hurt much, and was different to what I was expecting.
Finally, the time had come. I went to my box; picked out a 6-inch long, thin dildo and the large suction dong. I wanted to stick the dong to the bathroom wall so I could suck on it while fucking myself with the smaller dildo.
I started sucking on the black cock and noticed that it was extremely realistic. It was floppy, squishy, but rigid and it actually had a retractable foreskin so you could have it as an uncut or cut cock to suck or fuck. It also had a timer and a suction pack that you could put liquid in and have it ‘ejaculated’ after a certain period of time. New age sextoys are awesome.
Continuing to suck, I started to play around my ass with the smaller dildo, and eventually positioned it at my bum. I started to wriggle it around slightly and apply pressure to by bum-hole. Right then my wrist started to hurt, and with the pain I found myself tightening up and unable to push the dildo into my hungry tight bum. I tried in earnest a few times until I became quite upset with the whole thing and gave up trying. My sexual frustration turned to sadness and my sadness to crying. Now dressed in my track-pants, I went down the hall to my sisters’ room. I knocked on her door and heard ‘just a minute’ then some frantic movement from within her room.
The doorknob turned and there she stood in the doorway, looking slightly dishevelled in her pink track-pants and her tight white singlet. My sister was so lucky. Gorgeous.
She saw me standing there, snivelling and upset, and gestured me into her room, giving me a comforting hug. Fighting back tears I told her what had happened. She brought me over to her bed, sat me down and gently rocked me in her arms.
“shh, shhh sweetie, it will all be fine. Don’t worry honey; it’s only your first experience. You need to be calm, comfortable and relaxed.” I began to calm down, and had managed to stop crying. My sister still held me, and stroked my head.
“that’s a girl, don’t be upset sweetie.” Whenever I was upset my sister would have a habit of referring to me as a girl, and her little sister. For whatever reason, it always seemed to make me relax. I kinda liked it.
After a bit longer, my sister stood up, and went to her cupboard. From within, she began to pull out all manner of small and medium size dildos. My god, there were a lot of them. But it was clear that she was not finding what she sought.
“What are you looking for” I asked.
“I’m trying to find you a small dildo with a suction cup so that you don’t have to use your hand. I know it’s against my rule, but I think these circumstances deserve some leniency. But I cant find it.” Seeing the sad look on my face seemed to spur on my sister further, and then it seemed as if a light blew in her head. My sister stared at me for a moment, made a slight nodding movement and looked away. She suddenly seemed upbeat, and walked over to her closet to search for something new. I followed her a way, and managed to see a peculiar looking contraption on her floor. Wow! I thought, she had a fucking-machine.
No time to think, as she suddenly found what she was looking for, and ushered me away from within her closet, looking slightly disappointed at my following her. She then handed me a pair of fluoro-pink panties. The look of confusion on my face must have been obvious.
“Take these with you into the bathroom and put them on. There crotchless panties. I want you to put them on backwards and then put your track-pants back on. Then call me in.”
“why?”
“just get going honey, trust me, I have an idea that is going to solve your problem.”
I turned and went into the bathroom with a new smile across my face. I don’t know what she has thought of, but I trust my sister. I once again stripped down, then slid my sister panties up my leg, with my cock and balls held snug in the tight panties. I had put them on backwards, just as my sister had requested, and then put my track-pants back on.
“Ok, sis, I’m ready.”
Before coming in to get me, my sister knocked on the door, just to check I was done, and then again, she gestured me into her room. In one corner of her room, down on the floor, she had placed a thick rug and a number of large pillows. It was then I noticed a realistic black dong (the same as mine) stuck to the wall, and I looked to my sister who was holding a long thin dildo.
She had me lie down, with the pillows placed underneath my tummy and crotch. I was still a bit unsure of what she was going to do, but I kept on with it. She then told me to start sucking the black dildo like I had earlier in the bathroom. I used one hand on the dildo at the base and my other hand to prop myself up sightly so I could comfortably reach the dildo. I began to suck the dildo cautiously. Instantly the dong began to give out small amounts of a salty white liquid, which I guessed would be an imitation of pre-cum.
“that’s it sweetie, just concentrate on that big cock there, think about it going in and out of your sweet mouth, and try to get as much in as you can. That’s right honey, good girl. Now just relax and enjoy that.
My sister then did something very unexpected, and she began to wiggle my track-pants down, to just below the opening in my sisters borrowed Fluoro-pink panties
She then sucked on the small dildo a few times before lowering it to my bum.
“see honey, Jas is gonna help you feel good, sweet. This way I can help you out without getting you embarrassed by seeing you naked.”
“ha, yeah well, mission failure sis, cos I’m pretty embarrassed right now!”
“give it a second sweetie, I guarantee your gonna start feeling all kinds of good, and you wont care, or even notice that I’m here.”
With that, my sister gently pushed the head of the dildo in my butt, and began slowly moving it around, and getting deeper. The feelings were unbelievable. It was more than I could have imagined. With every movement of the dildo, it rubbed a spot inside me, sending shivers down my spine, and waves of pleasure through my body. It was pure ecstasy.
(this is it so far. and dont worry, im not going to have them suddenly fuck now, lol, i hope to have another few installments before they get that far)
i hope you like it. plz pm me or add comment here, thx and enjoy.
Adopted sister –
A few years back, my parents decided to adopt a girl from Russia. My mums’ friend was the one who told them about how young boys and girls were being given up for international adoption by their parents so they could escape the ongoing conflict in the region.
My father is a lawyer and my mother is a G.P. so we have always lived life quite comfortably, and I have grown to be independent as my parents are often worked right off their feet throughout the year. It was when I was 14 years old that my family gained a new member. Her name was Jasmine, she was 16 years old and she was unbelievably gorgeous. When she first arrived, it was clear that she could not understand English very well, but with our help, my new sister found her groove quickly, and we became a strong family. I would do anything for my sister.
Two years on, I’m 16 and my sister is 18, and what a stunner. She is 6 foot 2, weighs no more than 55kg, toned, athletic, with lightly golden skin and dirt-blonde hair. She has the face of an angel. Me, well, I’m not going to lie to you. I’m 6 foot, 58kg, and I am a pretty slight build, but I have a passion for boxing, so am pretty good in a fight. Honestly, my cock is 7 inches long and what id recon is average thickness. Nothing special, but it keeps me happy. I wouldn’t be described as hot, but any girl I’ve met has always called me cute. I’ve got a great sense of humour and can make just about anyone burst into laughter. My sister Sais that later in life, ill be fighting them off. I have my reservations, but we shall wait and see.
Both my sister and I are naturally shy people, her I don’t know why. But for us this works. We have a great relationship and help is there whenever we need it. My sister is straight, but has made it clear that she will not even think of boys until after high school or even after university. I, on the other hand, have some serious bisexual tendencies. I’ve never acted upon any urges; so lie confused amongst my fellow teenagers of the world.
Being close, my sister and I are quite open with one another, and she is the only person I have ever told about my cravings. She is great about it. She is always there if I get upset or start thinking about how our parents would react if they found out that I might be bisexual.
Right on my 16th birthday, my sister took me to an adult toyshop and bought me a few items to quench my ever-growing thirst. She helped me pick out an assortment of dildos in all shapes, sizes and functions. She also bought me a penis pump and a bunch of condoms, like 1000 in a box generic ones. As we were leaving, my sister was given a box by the storeowner, and I could only assume these were things she had bought on a previous occasion and was picking them up now. She wouldn’t let me see what she bought for herself. My sister only had one rule for me. She would only buy me dildos and the like that had no movement-parts, so no machines or vibrators. The only dildo she let me get with a suction cup was an 8-inch long, 3-inch thick black cock. Apart from this monster, my favourite was a largish butt plug that was made to stay in your ass for an entire day, and also a flexible double dong that was 18 inches long. I was really looking forward to playing with them.
Next up, Jasmine took me to a well-known gay area of town to have my ass and pubic hair removed using laser treatments. She told me that it would make playtime that much easier, more enjoyable and a whole lot cleaner. I have to admit, I loved having my hair laser-removed because my butt was now baby-skin smooth and my cock and balls looked a whole lot bigger. The thing I was most pleased about was that now my ass had definition, being rid of that ridiculous bush I once had.
When we got home, my sister made me sit down with her straight away and read all the instructions for everything she had just bought me, from the condoms and lubricant to the dongs and penis pump. She placed special significance on making sure I knew how to safely use the pump, telling me just how wrong things can go if I don’t use it right. To say the least, the whole talk was quite a cheek-reddening affair.
The final thing my sister did before sending me on my merry way was show me an instructional video on how to use a douche properly and to prepare an asshole for anal penetration. Finally it said how to ensure that it is as clean as possible when tidying up.
As soon as we were done, and as my sister expected, I was out of there like a flash. I ran up to my room, stowed away my box of toys in the back of my closet and moved towards the bathroom door that separates my and my sisters’ rooms. One thing she liked about having a bi-curious brother was that I kept the bathroom clean.
I went into the bathroom, stripped naked and sat down on the bath mat. I filled my new douche with warm water and the applied a small amount of lubricant to my sphincter like the video had said. Id gone no. 2 before we went out and hadn’t eaten anything since, so I was sure my bowels would be empty. The cleaning was a success, and after two flushes, ran crystal clear.
After that was done, I put some KY on my hand and smeared it on my bum, working it into my flesh. I then started putting a finger or two into my ass, slowly at first, then a little faster. It didn’t hurt much, and was different to what I was expecting.
Finally, the time had come. I went to my box; picked out a 6-inch long, thin dildo and the large suction dong. I wanted to stick the dong to the bathroom wall so I could suck on it while fucking myself with the smaller dildo.
I started sucking on the black cock and noticed that it was extremely realistic. It was floppy, squishy, but rigid and it actually had a retractable foreskin so you could have it as an uncut or cut cock to suck or fuck. It also had a timer and a suction pack that you could put liquid in and have it ‘ejaculated’ after a certain period of time. New age sextoys are awesome.
Continuing to suck, I started to play around my ass with the smaller dildo, and eventually positioned it at my bum. I started to wriggle it around slightly and apply pressure to by bum-hole. Right then my wrist started to hurt, and with the pain I found myself tightening up and unable to push the dildo into my hungry tight bum. I tried in earnest a few times until I became quite upset with the whole thing and gave up trying. My sexual frustration turned to sadness and my sadness to crying. Now dressed in my track-pants, I went down the hall to my sisters’ room. I knocked on her door and heard ‘just a minute’ then some frantic movement from within her room.
The doorknob turned and there she stood in the doorway, looking slightly dishevelled in her pink track-pants and her tight white singlet. My sister was so lucky. Gorgeous.
She saw me standing there, snivelling and upset, and gestured me into her room, giving me a comforting hug. Fighting back tears I told her what had happened. She brought me over to her bed, sat me down and gently rocked me in her arms.
“shh, shhh sweetie, it will all be fine. Don’t worry honey; it’s only your first experience. You need to be calm, comfortable and relaxed.” I began to calm down, and had managed to stop crying. My sister still held me, and stroked my head.
“that’s a girl, don’t be upset sweetie.” Whenever I was upset my sister would have a habit of referring to me as a girl, and her little sister. For whatever reason, it always seemed to make me relax. I kinda liked it.
After a bit longer, my sister stood up, and went to her cupboard. From within, she began to pull out all manner of small and medium size dildos. My god, there were a lot of them. But it was clear that she was not finding what she sought.
“What are you looking for” I asked.
“I’m trying to find you a small dildo with a suction cup so that you don’t have to use your hand. I know it’s against my rule, but I think these circumstances deserve some leniency. But I cant find it.” Seeing the sad look on my face seemed to spur on my sister further, and then it seemed as if a light blew in her head. My sister stared at me for a moment, made a slight nodding movement and looked away. She suddenly seemed upbeat, and walked over to her closet to search for something new. I followed her a way, and managed to see a peculiar looking contraption on her floor. Wow! I thought, she had a fucking-machine.
No time to think, as she suddenly found what she was looking for, and ushered me away from within her closet, looking slightly disappointed at my following her. She then handed me a pair of fluoro-pink panties. The look of confusion on my face must have been obvious.
“Take these with you into the bathroom and put them on. There crotchless panties. I want you to put them on backwards and then put your track-pants back on. Then call me in.”
“why?”
“just get going honey, trust me, I have an idea that is going to solve your problem.”
I turned and went into the bathroom with a new smile across my face. I don’t know what she has thought of, but I trust my sister. I once again stripped down, then slid my sister panties up my leg, with my cock and balls held snug in the tight panties. I had put them on backwards, just as my sister had requested, and then put my track-pants back on.
“Ok, sis, I’m ready.”
Before coming in to get me, my sister knocked on the door, just to check I was done, and then again, she gestured me into her room. In one corner of her room, down on the floor, she had placed a thick rug and a number of large pillows. It was then I noticed a realistic black dong (the same as mine) stuck to the wall, and I looked to my sister who was holding a long thin dildo.
She had me lie down, with the pillows placed underneath my tummy and crotch. I was still a bit unsure of what she was going to do, but I kept on with it. She then told me to start sucking the black dildo like I had earlier in the bathroom. I used one hand on the dildo at the base and my other hand to prop myself up sightly so I could comfortably reach the dildo. I began to suck the dildo cautiously. Instantly the dong began to give out small amounts of a salty white liquid, which I guessed would be an imitation of pre-cum.
“that’s it sweetie, just concentrate on that big cock there, think about it going in and out of your sweet mouth, and try to get as much in as you can. That’s right honey, good girl. Now just relax and enjoy that.
My sister then did something very unexpected, and she began to wiggle my track-pants down, to just below the opening in my sisters borrowed Fluoro-pink panties
She then sucked on the small dildo a few times before lowering it to my bum.
“see honey, Jas is gonna help you feel good, sweet. This way I can help you out without getting you embarrassed by seeing you naked.”
“ha, yeah well, mission failure sis, cos I’m pretty embarrassed right now!”
“give it a second sweetie, I guarantee your gonna start feeling all kinds of good, and you wont care, or even notice that I’m here.”
With that, my sister gently pushed the head of the dildo in my butt, and began slowly moving it around, and getting deeper. The feelings were unbelievable. It was more than I could have imagined. With every movement of the dildo, it rubbed a spot inside me, sending shivers down my spine, and waves of pleasure through my body. It was pure ecstasy.
(this is it so far. and dont worry, im not going to have them suddenly fuck now, lol, i hope to have another few installments before they get that far)